Thursday, November 15, 2007

Foreshadowing

I think of foreshadowing as similar to planting a clue or misdirection (red herring) in a mystery story – you don’t want to be to overt when you do it. Foreshadowing is the subtle positioning of information that usually serves two (or more) purposes.
The first purpose is to provide information relevant at the part of the story that is being told.
The second purpose is to explain something that happens later, for which an explanation at that point in the story would significantly disrupt it.

Here is a simple example from my Finger of Suspicion story.

Early on, I wrote "Kelly fingers, their nails chewed to the quick,”…

The first purpose was to tell the reader about Kelly – anxious, a nail biter, not in a position to be concerned with her looks.

This is then compared (though not specifically) with the long painted fingernails of the kidnapped heiress and finally revealed as the reason Kelly retains her digit (and perhaps her life).

Franklin explains foreshadowing on page 150 of ‘Writing for Story’ as “the technique by which the writer unobtrusively inserts details early in the story that will allow him [or her] to conduct his [or her] dramatic scenes without the necessity of explaining the background details.”

Franklin says that the principle was codified by Anton Chekov as Chekov’s Law, which specifies, “if the opening of a story mentions a shotgun hanging over the mantel, then that shotgun must be fired before the story ends.”

2 comments:

Tim said...

Like so many things, I think a foreshadow may only be clearest in retrospect. A lot of details are added to set the context for a story, but every one cannot be a foreshadow. A shotgun over the mantle is an easy example. Nail-biter could easily be just a way to portray her character. though in this case, you say it foreshadows what is to come.

Tim

Geoff said...

I think in some respects you are right. Things build and ideas form both consciously and subconsciously as we write.
Perhaps that's why afterwards we spend time analyzing our own writing and commenting on the work of others, the better to understand for future use.
Most times we go back and add more detail or take some out, as was the case in my example. The first draft is never the last.